Talk:Thundering Engine Woman (historical)

I removed my addition after reviewing this page after your edit since I thought it was pretty well redundant with the original article (once I corrected what I considered to be a factual inaccuracy preceding your change of phrasing). I'm pleased you didn't think so.

I think the article may still need a bit of work, although I do like your strategy of merging the items. But I won't go ahead right away, so it doesn't look like an edit war. Since you've merged my addition into the lead main paragraph, I think the reference should become a "reference" with tags rather than being embodied, and a careful check for redundancy is needed. --Quadibloc 00:17, 14 December 2008 (UTC)