Talk:Lucrezia Mongfish/Mad

Hi Quadibloc thanks for improving my attempt at revision. The partial sentences I left did need subjects. The paragraph still wants repair. The first sentence (as you revised it) would be better as two. The period should replace the second comma. The last sentence also would do well for being split. Period after "sincere" Change "which" to :"That".

I am generally not an editor. I don't claim mad editing skillz. When something comes to my attention in this regard it is usually pretty dire in need of help.

I am on the talk page rather than re-editing to prevent any edit wars. I am hoping you will see this and continue the editing. Cheers --Rej¿ ¤¤ ? 23:52, October 11, 2009 (UTC)